Feb. 2nd, 2011

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So we had another story in Creative Writing, this time having to do with a Murder Mystery. I wasn't sure why I decided to do what I did, but I really wanted to write about mice. I'm sure this has everything to do with my deep seeded love for Brian Jacques and the Redwall series, but I also took inspiration from Ratatouille as far as the setting goes. However, this isn't a kid's story, again, probably because of the Redwall influence.

I didn't go through and check for errors, and there are a couple things I want to bchange (like replacing Tombo with Ambrose, so that he can be there from the eginning and such.) I got really into it, though (I was up until 4:30 this morning. I'm insane.) and I kinda like. So yeah.

I realize it ends kind of abruptly. The page limit was max of 20, and this is 21 and two lines, and I didn't want to go much past that. When it comes time to revise our works for the final project, I'll give it a proper conclusion.

Anyway, hope you like it aaaand thanks for reading.

The Mysterious Murder of Edison Flaxtail, Followed by the Disappearance of an Object of Great Importance, a Supposed Kidnapping, and the Unexpected Outcome of the Entire Ordeal )


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